wk2 - Exploded Comic
Wednesday, October 1st, 2008I did a comic that consists of three stories crossing to show more than one ending sequence to the audience. The subject was ‘Tony Montana‘ from the movie Scarface, who is becoming almost insane in the particular scene that I chose to use. Since this isn’t about re-creating or ‘just’ cartooning one of my favorite movies, I decided to tweak the story by grabbing one famous(very!) line - “Say hello to my little friend!” where the story begins.
Intended flow was that the audience to read
- left vertical story line first, move onto right side one following by
- the ‘bridge’ strip which consists of two identical ‘pause’s in center, then
- view the third story.
And each strip should tell you following stories
- Left vertical line: Tony gets angry (for what happened before) then yells at the cuban mobs (outside of the door), there’s no response but a cat’s moan.
- The bridge line: An intended ‘pause’ by cloning same cuts of Tony pointing his gun at the door. Finally he hears ‘Hola’ from the cuban mob outside and feels embarrassed by.
- Right vertical line: Cuban mobs waiting for the right moment to burst in, gathering more crew around the door area. Then they hear loud “Say hello!” from inside and respond saying ‘hola’. The door blasts out by angry Tony’s gunshot, casualties, and there’s Tony looking down them and saying ” I said ‘Hello’(not any other languages?)”.
Feedback from class: I knew that the first one would be ‘why not ‘z’ axis’? which means, this comic lacks of three dimensional aspect. I started off thinking about making comics in 3D form even before brainstorming about the story, however, creating comic itself(in rather conventional way such as drawing and putting it in the square cell box) seemed priority that I should spend more time. And… I ended up respecting all reference comics from online and spending my lifetime to mimic them as I could. I think it was a good practice to understand, or at least experience comic drawing skill.
Besides this, more powerful and unexpected one was that many of class didn’t quite undestand how story goes. And some details such as sweating with darkened face wasn’t comprehensible.















